Even though these are retells of the story line, I'm impressed most with the clarity and cleanliness of the telling.
I'm not exaggerating when I say I see a clear evolution in your storytelling from the days when you put down every detail to these of today. Timing and flow of narrative, not a wasted word, all apparent.


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TILE#11 October 28th - THOU WOULDST FAIN HEAR ABOUT FEY? - MIKE October 28, 2025, 2:29 pm
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