- God breathed into his nostrils the breath of life -
and then man questioned and threw tantrums like children

It's clear you gave serious thought and consideration in your post. It's also clear it's through the lens and words of the Christianese kind. And oddly a splash of AI to relate in human terms?

In general I believe your heart has good intentions. If you want to appeal to a broader audience then live the life, walk the walk, and save the talk for when they ask. Preaching and sermons are for those who want to listen.