I think it's a good and factual post focusing more on the parure than on the ladies who have worn it. Regarding the writing I see a few minor misspellings and at times the text lacks a certain flow but that's something that will come automatically with practice. Keep up the good work.
Good Morning All,
As some of you may know, I write a fine jewellery blog and I've just published a new article on the Danish Ruby Parure:
https://thebeaumonde.org/the-danish-ruby-parure/
I would really appreciate feedback, positive and negative. I'm trying to improve my writing style and would love to hear you thoughts on this piece.
Kind regards
Sam
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