Said suggestios gratefully received I assure you. I was frankly relieved even to have been able to roughly outline the story's possible direction mainly for Tammys benefit.
I need her to listen when I read out the latest installment and make useful comments on what else is needed (such as details of smells, clothing, furniture and my own ad libs whilst recounting the basis for a particular sketch).
She too says its autobiographical but perhaps too much so and you need to put more personality into it.
You've given me a lot to ponder and I'm very grateful for it, I could go on at length about this but time for tea and some research into those other names you sugested.
I'd much rather discuss the story than not, it gives me ideas like thinking perhaps I ought to do this properly.
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