I had to stop right after the sub hits the bottom after being damaged crossing the straits of Gib, so I don't know how it ends but I doubt its a happy finale.
Okay and now for the story - mine.
I have probably lost the original version tiles for ever as they were on an older laptop that died and also some are on USB thumb drives I never thought to bring with me.
So if I ever do decide to try and get this finished then I will have to start over although I remember the general outline and haven't really lost much that cannot be recreated.
I'll need to implant Charles a bit more firmly, at least the explanation of his return and his fathers acceptance of it, as for the rest, some things are best just forgotten.
At least it gave me some way to tie in the black and white onlooker angle using the mediator etc and also a way to tie in the creation of the barrier and the magic/science that it both depends upon and protects.
However I only want to embed the Charles sequence enough to be able to use it at the end to explain how everything's tied together. I still prefer the Timothy Tinkletap angle though right now I may need to fudge a bit as I can't remember how he and the dwarf get to the elves domain.
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