Mike, I'm admittedly torn here, and I'm sure you figured I would be.

On the one hand, this isn't your best work because the vehemence
overshadows the craft. You're hitting those keys pretty hard.

If I might be so bold, parody needs a delicacy to be both humorous and effective in order to be satisfying. It is much more satisfying to slip a stiletto between the ribs than crush a skull with a sledgehammer.

On the other hand, I know how much you need an outlet at this juncture, so for your mental health keep going. I'll read it not because its good parody or even comfortable reading, but because you need it, my dear old friend.